Il'l Be Remembered

il'l be remembered by the things iv'e done
And by the things iv'e did
The things i have lost
And the things i have won
The momment my life is done
And they close the lid
But my time is drawing near
My watch is ticking slow
I'm sorry my family dear
But soon il'l have to go
My body is dieing down
I'm sorry again to say
You all will soon have to lay me in the ground
Soon one day
I'm getting weak by the hour
Every step I take
Speaking my mind on paper
Is not being a cowared
It's a choice I chose to make
Il'l miss you all
Yall will always be in my heart
Dead or alive
We will never be apart
So the day I die
Remember what I say
Keep me in your thoughts everyday
And do me a favor for me when I'm gone
Don't cry
Just know inside your heart that I'm home





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redcg416 said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 5:41 pm
This was so sad and sweet. It reminds me of my own losses. I loved every word. It flowed nicley. Excellent Job!
 
allgood15 replied...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 4:59 pm
thank u so much i tried my best...
 
sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 2:36 pm
great job. this is very touching and meaningful. a few spelling errors, but that's all i have to say 4 criticism. u get 5 starzz from me ;))
 
allgood15 replied...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 5:00 pm
thank u for the 5 stars it helps every bit!
 
Powd3er said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 2:28 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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