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Does it hurt forever?
Does heartbreak hurt
forever?
Or does it fade
Like a scar?
Is there a cure?
Is there a cure
For heartbreak?
Like antibiotics
Or cough syrup?
Or does it stick to you,
Stay with you,
Like cancer?
It may not
hurt
the way a cut might.
It may not burn,
The way a fire might.
But it hurts
And it burns
All the same.
Does it hurt
forever?
Does heartbreak hurt forever?





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DallysGrrl said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 9:15 pm
Thank you so much!! I really appreciate your comments. I'm glad u liked it. =)
 
thewritician said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 7:56 am
I like what you said that you had to fight the urge of tears. I think you did an amazing job in this poem. You kept your readers watching for the next question. I really liked the line "It may not burn, the way a fire might." Let's just say it's really cool. Great job!
 
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