Hidden MAG

February 18, 2010
By MorgyPoo SILVER, Dyersville, Iowa
MorgyPoo SILVER, Dyersville, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"I love my mama and my dog..I'm sorry"

I bet you don't remember.
Nobody does.
No passersby in the hallway, or teachers in the class.
I am an unknown person, hiding in the ­darkness, waiting for my turn to be ­recognized.
My name is my identity, and it seems as if it will always be hidden.
No one knows me. To some, it's like I'm not even there.
But we were together; we had a moment.
And yet you still pretend not to know me,
And I'm supposed to be fine with that?

The author's comments:
This piece was created at a time that I felt like a complete outsider. Whenever times I get tough...I just put my feelings into writing....

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ZhadaMone GOLD said...
on May. 10 2012 at 10:43 am
ZhadaMone GOLD, Westwood, New Jersey
13 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you as much as I did yesterday but, not as much as I will tommorow"

Never stop writing, your amazing : )

Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:02 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

This is really well written and very touching.  You're a great writer :)  Oh, and congrats on getting in the magazine!  If you get the chance, would you mind taking a look at some of my work? Thanks!

on May. 30 2010 at 7:18 pm
skywriter PLATINUM, Hood River, Oregon
24 articles 11 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The first draft of anything is crap."

It's beautiful. I love the feeling in this poem. Your writing style is a lot like mine, and I love the flow of your poetry. I am writing  a series of Holocaust poems, and they all have the same sorrow and longing as this one. Great job! (could you look at some of my writing?)


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