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Time Slows Down For Me

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My paradise is simple, yet unique.
To be walking in the early signs of spring,
With the cool wind all around.
And for that one instant you shiver, and suddenly feel alone.
Only then does the sun warm your bones and show you the beauty of a crisp February afternoon.
Then I see, time favors me.


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Nikiblue said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 5:20 pm
I think this is pretty. I would have made the "Only then does the sun warm your bones and show you the beauty of crisp February afternoon" sentence a little shorter. Like breaking it up between "the sun warm your bones" and "and show you the beauty" and "of a crisp February afternoon" all in separate stanzas, you know? Just a suggestion though. Good work (:
 
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