Love Lost

February 16, 2010
By Overusedpen BRONZE, Ft. Worth, Texas
Overusedpen BRONZE, Ft. Worth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I contend that we are both atheists. I just believe in one fewer god than you do. When you understand why you dismiss all the other possible gods, you will understand why I dismiss yours"
– Stephen Roberts


As the wind carreses these lonely rocks I can only dream of thee for you are the sunlight to my flower and the salt to my sea. your ever growing beauty does not seem to leave as my heart breaks and my heart aches your smile does not falter. Although I fight for our love god seems to alter, my plans shot my hopes without you, i am the flower without the bee and the forest with no tree and I shall always remember thee.

The author's comments:
My first "love" was the inspiration that spurred my writing of this poem, and alot of other poetry along with it, I hope to convey a sense of despair and of hope from this and bottle all of the out-of-control emotion that teens all around the world feel everyday.

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on Apr. 6 2010 at 9:18 pm
HunterGirl_58 GOLD, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"If this is what it takes to get there. . . . then BRING ON THE PAIN!!!"

Wow!

I love the rhym in this =D

FANTASTIC!!!!



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