the path we walk upon

February 17, 2010
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everything is so uncertain
i suppose change is what makes us human
able to adapt
i don't like these new changes
so uprupt
life shaking alterations
feeling fear find its way in
my thoughts twist and assimilate
it formulates this
i wonder what my fate would've been
if there was no outside intervention
no one to make these changes for me
i am what Ive become
a slow adaption of my atmosphere
morphing me into a being like myself
who else could i have been?
would i have liked it?
this is all so strange...
unfamiliar and unknown
ill never know about the lives that couldn't been
the things i would've known
or the people ill never meet
i have to follow the path laid before me
the one fate has chosen
in this somehow- new life
i could be capable of great things
i just have to find myself,
and walk the path
wherever it may take me

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Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 4:07 pm
i agree with the no capitals. a very good choice for a vey well written poem. it was very good. keep writing more. check out a few of mine and let me kno watcha think. love it!! much appriciated.
VoiceOfYesterday This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 7:33 pm
Wow! This is really insightful and good. (:
I think your stylistic choice of no captials was a good idea for the poem also.
xLpoet said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 4:21 pm
Extremely insightful.
PoetLaureate07 said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 9:38 am
I love it!!! && i can relate.... all one can do is just to follow fate's wish........ only hope and pray that there isnt a whole lot of pain!!! =..)
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