Alone I Stand

February 14, 2010
By AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.


I stand alone,
with no one to talk to.
No one wants to be my friend.

When teams are picked,
I am always last.
All alone is how I am.

No matter where I go,
not a second glance is cast.
People just think because I stand alone,I want to be alone.



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on Jun. 26 2010 at 12:15 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thank you!I wrote it when i was feeling sad... So im glad that it seems sad. Thanks for commenting! I appreciate it! (:

on Jun. 25 2010 at 10:57 am
MoonlitxRose BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, try again."

AW! *Sob* That's sad! It's really good, but it's so sad! But in a way, I think anyone can relate to this and I like that. Nice job on writing this!

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:26 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thank you very much!

on Feb. 22 2010 at 4:59 pm
Poet4ever SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Guilt by association is guilt nonetheless" CSI: New York

yo my fellow idahoan! Great job. If you want any critsism what-so-ever, it would be that the last line might be too long, but i LOVe the poem. And i feel you, it sucks :(

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 5:04 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

so are you!! really :)

on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:00 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thanks! You know you are like, so sweet.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 9:15 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Your work is more than great.. I really like it! All of it! :)

on Feb. 20 2010 at 11:49 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thank you so much! It makes me feel good to know that other people can relate to my work.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 9:37 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I totally feel you!!

You know ur writing makes me feel like i belong to it.. I love this! so true

I like the part where u said people think just becuase i stand alone I want to be alone.. so touchable! great love it!!


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