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I stand alone,
with no one to talk to.
No one wants to be my friend.

When teams are picked,
I am always last.
All alone is how I am.

No matter where I go,
not a second glance is cast.
People just think because I stand alone,I want to be alone.





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MoonlitxRose said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 10:57 am
AW! *Sob* That's sad! It's really good, but it's so sad! But in a way, I think anyone can relate to this and I like that. Nice job on writing this!
 
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 12:15 pm
Thank you!I wrote it when i was feeling sad... So im glad that it seems sad. Thanks for commenting! I appreciate it! (:
 
Poet4ever said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 4:59 pm
yo my fellow idahoan! Great job. If you want any critsism what-so-ever, it would be that the last line might be too long, but i LOVe the poem. And i feel you, it sucks :(
 
lostnhim replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:26 pm
Thank you very much!
 
Shahed said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 9:37 pm
I totally feel you!!
You know ur writing makes me feel like i belong to it.. I love this! so true
I like the part where u said people think just becuase i stand alone I want to be alone.. so touchable! great love it!!
 
lostnhim replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 11:49 pm
Thank you so much! It makes me feel good to know that other people can relate to my work.
 
Shahed replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 9:15 am
Your work is more than great.. I really like it! All of it! :)
 
lostnhim replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 1:00 pm
Thanks! You know you are like, so sweet.
 
Shahed replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 5:04 pm
so are you!! really :)
 
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