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The Balling of the Fist

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And deep within there hung what was once a raw but uncommon sense of perception. And now in it resides an ugly promise of sunshine.



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Acalleq This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 3:51 pm:
hmmm, took a while for me to figure this one out and to me it feels like it's lacking but then again you can let 100 ppl read the same poem and get different results
 
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Niftygrrl said...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 12:07 pm:
This is talent.I love this. Im going to check out more of your stuff.
 
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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2010 at 5:06 pm:
I guess youre right. so what if the sun doesnt come up. who needs daylight anyway. this is very nice. youre a creative little guy(or girl, whatever). 5 stars.
 
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