February 2, 2010
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Lyrical, colorful, out there, doesn’t care,
Waiting for someone to connect with the beat.

Contrast, think fast,
Let the music carry you away.
Salty, mellow, tingly yet calm,
Graceful yet simultaneously staccato.

Golden light reflecting,
Crowd waits expecting
Music to over flow, make them want to dance.

Vibrations bubbling, silky beats seep out
Into an atmosphere that leaves everything to chance.

Silken sound, now like cotton,
Jumps a little, now forgotten.
On the textured air
The chocolate bass and brass
Add their own signature taste
To the vivid medley we call

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Sarahnade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2010 at 5:32 pm
Blues? Cause that's what I'm reminded of. Took me back to Harlem. Maybe you and Langston Hughes should meet up and share some stuff. I really liked it!
mindymax said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 2:44 pm
cool, inever thought i can feel music, thank you for the experience
lunaEccentric said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 5:01 pm
will do :) lol
lunaEccentric replied...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 5:04 pm
that was great! :) My favorite was the deep south... Is it sad I've actaully heard someone say that with almost the same dialect?
hyperactivemayfly This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 11:30 am
Loo-oovin' it!! I love the way you write!! It's totally pwn!!! (if you don't get what pwn means, look up 'word of the day' (by nigahiga) on youtube.
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