Fixiated Cry

February 2, 2010
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Gaze into my stare
You have no idea what it means
Untied at the seams
No obvious connection
You smile, I bleed
An ulcer that stabs through my linings
A hurt so serious
When I look to find you
You’re not there
I wish you knew how to catch my stare
Still you gaze…
At what you can’t understand
On the surface
Unable to immerse yourself in truth
Away; fading into me
Not looking at what you’re getting into
Shallow end of the stick-
Menacing huffs of air
Straining to fix the broken enigma
Still clothed, no sign of nakedness
It lies before you…
Comprehension never born
The shallow film consumes you

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DaniW This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 30, 2010 at 9:16 am
Your work is so intense! You can feel every word as you read
Bullet2MyHead09 said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 2:49 pm
wow! amazing. i really like your work. it's really deep and expressive. and i love this poem! and thanks for checking out my work by the way. =)
Live+Laugh+love said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 2:26 pm
i like :) im amazed at your discription. keep writing, ill check them out for sure, check out my work
xLpoet replied...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 6:22 am
Thank you so much! I'll definently check out your work.
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