My Tears

January 31, 2010
Rolling down my cheeks
Like lava
Rolling down the side of the volcano
Searing away the flesh
With every drop
Eating away
At my soul

Of perpetrator?
Or prey?

Complicated journey
Never knowing what’s going to happen

Never saw this coming
Hit me like a semi-truck
My tears
Only thing to make me feel better

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MsRocker said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 12:55 pm
i like how i contrasted tears rollling down your cheek with lava and a volcanoe, thats creative, good job =D
Music4Life This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 5:16 pm
Thank you! I wrote this one for a creative writing class, and the challenge was to come up with a good simile or metaphor.
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