If Only

If only I didn't get lost in your eyes, then fall in love with your smile, Why do we have so much in common? I guess that's just our style

If only you weren't so funny, If only you weren't so smart, If only we hadn't met, So you wouldn't steal my heart

To you I'm just a girl, If only you would see, That if we took a chance, How perfect we would be

Years from now we'll try it
Then you'll hold me close, A love to last forever, With the boy I chose





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kmarie14 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 9:44 pm

dear supernova7,

this poem is amazing.

your writing is amazing.

please never stop.(:

thats all...

sincerly me (:

 
Supernova7 replied...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 12:07 pm
Thanx for the support:)
 
SamiLynn said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:42 pm
awww i love this! ive felt this way too <3 it's such an awesome feeling and daydream- you portray it extremely well and make it sound so sweet :)
 
Supernova7 replied...
Sept. 28, 2010 at 11:13 pm
Thanks:)                                             
 
A.Dreamer said...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 12:33 pm
I like how different this poem is from the ones you usually write, but it still turned out totally great.
It's a very sweet, cute poem and I love it! :DD
 
Supernova7 replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:33 pm
thanx Dreamer:)
 
thewritician replied...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 11:36 am
you spaced out your lined perfectly and it rhymed great. so i guess i'm trying to say that I LOVED IT! !!!!!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 2:48 pm
aw thank you:)
 
Supernova7 said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 2:46 pm
thanks for commenting:)
 
mwahxandxmwa said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 6:40 pm

I love this as a contrast to some of your poems. This is about a heart stolen where as some others are about a heart crushed.

I think you are amazing and I am slightly envious of your rythm.

Thankyou :D

 
JoetheBlanc said...
May 25, 2010 at 12:02 pm
great poem! u write alot about love, and are very good at it!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 8:24 pm
Thank you:)
 
Danny9 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 20, 2010 at 10:26 pm
This is sweet.  I like how the rhyme flows.
 
Supernova7 replied...
May 20, 2010 at 10:31 pm
Thanks:)                       
 
relientkgirlie replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:02 am
I love all your poems...your really talented!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 2:08 pm
Thank you:)
 
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