The Game

January 29, 2010
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You too my hand,
and grasped my soul.
You held it by the throat,
and wouldn't let go.
My heart sank lower,
as I realized the pain.
You should have told me,
you love was just a game.

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MessOfADreamer said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 6:58 pm
This is really good. You have some typos in here, ("too" instead of "took", "you" instead of "your") so next time you want to submit something, you might want to pay attention to that, but otherwise, your writing is very good. This poem reminded me of something I went through last year, it's very relatable. Keep it up. :D
kellygurl365 said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 1:47 pm
yah this is realluy good i love it keep it coming
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