The Game

January 29, 2010
By Applejuice SILVER, Spring Valley, Illinois
Applejuice SILVER, Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't fair


You too my hand,
and grasped my soul.
You held it by the throat,
and wouldn't let go.
My heart sank lower,
as I realized the pain.
You should have told me,
you love was just a game.



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on Feb. 10 2010 at 6:58 pm
MessOfADreamer PLATINUM, North Tonawanda, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I write for the same reason I breathe -- because if I didn't, I would die." -Isaac Asimov

This is really good. You have some typos in here, ("too" instead of "took", "you" instead of "your") so next time you want to submit something, you might want to pay attention to that, but otherwise, your writing is very good. This poem reminded me of something I went through last year, it's very relatable. Keep it up. :D

on Feb. 7 2010 at 1:47 pm
kellygurl365 SILVER, Cave Junction, Oregon
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yah this is realluy good i love it keep it coming


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