Daddy

January 25, 2010
By SMiCHEllEB* BRONZE, Dennison, Ohio
SMiCHEllEB* BRONZE, Dennison, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

When I took my first gasp of air, you were there.
I heard a loud hoarse cry coming from my own throat.
I saw you, and you introduced yourself as Daddy.

When I won my first softball game, you were there.
I smelled the satisfaction radiating through the summer breeze.
I remember you smiling so proudly and a sence of importance warmed my heart.
When I experienced the loss of my first boyfrind, you were there.
I wonder if my life would be different if someone else had taken your spot.
I discovered that if you weren't my Dad, my life would not be as special.
So with this, I am forever and always thanking you.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Feb. 3 2010 at 11:45 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1029 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

malgal3 SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 10:01 am
malgal3 SILVER, Uhrichsville, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shall not condemn you for what you did wrong yesterday, if only you do it right today"
"If you learn from your mistakes, won't you just keep making them?"

Aww so cute! :)


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!