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Daddy

When I took my first gasp of air, you were there.
I heard a loud hoarse cry coming from my own throat.
I saw you, and you introduced yourself as Daddy.

When I won my first softball game, you were there.
I smelled the satisfaction radiating through the summer breeze.
I remember you smiling so proudly and a sence of importance warmed my heart.
When I experienced the loss of my first boyfrind, you were there.
I wonder if my life would be different if someone else had taken your spot.
I discovered that if you weren't my Dad, my life would not be as special.
So with this, I am forever and always thanking you.





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Powd3er said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 11:45 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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malgal3 said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 10:01 am
Aww so cute! :)
 
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