"Ambrosia"

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“Ambrosia”
Groggily sipping into reality,
Each drop orchestrating,
Finely blended love, its breath upon my chin,
Eager nostrils, thirsting lips open with desire,
Creamy fragrance scintillating my senses,
My soul within a cup,
Offering my resolve to drink you,
One who measures out my life with every sip,
Steaming melody upon my satisfied tongue,
The prospect of java, full of promise,
A relationship between mind and mug,
Life’s elixir, wrapped in my warmest grip,
Just another pleasurable sip, an encore of life,
Harmony,
Filling the ceramic cup of the mind with liquid zeal,
Savoring each sip,
Prolonging each mouthful,
Taking time to dream,
A limited cup,
A goodbye,
Only the warmth remains.





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Go Gilford! said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 9:41 pm
This poem is a masterpiece!!!! Publish, Publish, Publish!
 
PersonFromGilford said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 7:56 pm
Great poem WeSki! Hope you get published! Hey editors, you should publish this poem it's really good!
 
Billy Elliot said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 7:52 pm
Wow, this really paints a great picture. I'm craving coffee now. Billy Elliot approves.
 
aquafina said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 7:50 pm
A phenomenal piece of descriptive writing, I hope to see this published in the magazine!!!!!!
 
hermione said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 7:47 pm
I don't drink coffee but this description makes it sound pretty mouth-watering. I'm afraid to drink it in case I get addicted like in this poem. Ha Ha
 
Coolkid said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 3:40 pm
This was a great poem. I like the use of different words to create a picture.
 
tigilles said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 12:00 pm
From Paris (France)
These are words of heart
 
PiperGirl said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 11:50 am
Wonderful -- reads like coffee and feels like skiing. Makes me miss the US and skiing!
 
barone said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 6:16 am
Beautiful writing! Very impressive! It certainly hit a nerve and I could definately relate to it.
 
Up to Par said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 7:48 pm
Wow!! After reading this thats all I have to say!!! Kudos to the author!!!
 
Sunshine said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 7:46 pm
An absolutely stunning piece of work. Painted a picturesque image with his/her descriptions!
 
Thundersaunt said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 6:24 am
The visuals this author paints with words is amazing. I can't wait to read more from him/her.
 
slovakiamia said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:27 pm
excellent, nice flow, good use of language, almost can sit on that chair and drink it...
 
Just one more cup said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 1:39 pm
My morning ritual has been turned into poetry. Oh, how I long for just one more cup.
 
JeanieBeanie said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 1:35 pm
Creative description - I can almost taste the Ambrosia
 
Bibliofile said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 11:05 am
He has captured the appreciation of those of us who are coffee nuts. A wonderful poem.
 
Literacynut said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 11:01 am
A true appreciation of is discovered in this creative works.
 
coffeenut said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 8:55 pm
I can relate! It is joy for so many of us. Why is that. Great poem!!
 
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