The Dreaded Moment

January 22, 2010
Today I woke up on the wrong side of yesterday,
With a nightmare I knew I could never shake.
When you told me it would never work anyway,
I was hoping it wouldn't end in so much pain.
The end was near and I knew it,
Hoping it would never come,
Dreading the moment you would tell me,
That from now on we are done.

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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 11:21 pm
i love this captain. its short and simple yet you slipped in a whole bunch of awesomeness before you sent this sucker off in the mail. and i love the fact that you woke up on the wrong side of yesterday. 5 stars captain. op your dance.
the_Horsegirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 5:04 pm
Wow, this is good. It sounds sort of like it could be lyrics to a song.
CaptainFabulous. replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 9:58 pm
that is actually how i started it, as a song!!
kind of cool that it seems like it should be
sarahbug16 said...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 5:58 pm
GOOD!! but wut happened??? something tells me u wrote this for a good purpose, tell me tell me
CaptainFabulous. replied...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 12:03 pm
this is an older poem i wrote last year
Powd3er said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 3:00 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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