Scared

January 21, 2010
By VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?


I'm scared you won't understand,
So I'm hiding from you.
If you saw the real me,
You would call me a monster.

I'm scared you won't understand,
So I'm showing you a fake.
This fake shows nothing,
Yet you still give it a kiss.

I'm scared you won't understand,
So I'm leaving you alone.
Both of me in hiding,
Still loving you from afar.

I'm scared you understood,
So I'm leaving you alone.
You've caught my emotions
And twisted my life.

I'm scared of you,
So I'm running away.
Running until I'm free,
of your happy memory.



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This article has 11 comments.


on May. 12 2010 at 3:43 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thank you! :)

on May. 12 2010 at 3:39 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thank you!

you know... ive never thought about my style. it just sort of comes to me.


on May. 11 2010 at 9:20 pm
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

I think its great, it makes me think of my poem Monster in some ways. You definatly have your own style, i found that lots of your poems end with the last two lines rhyming but nothing else, i like it.

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 6:57 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

I love it, i think it captures so many emtions and little stanzas. It's perfect <3

on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:10 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

this poem deff made me think about what you are trying to say, which i think is very good when it comes to writing poems, i loveee leaving people thinking. good job :)

on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:36 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thank you! :)

on Apr. 13 2010 at 10:32 am
Kristain BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments
Beautiful!

on Mar. 24 2010 at 3:50 pm
WaterQueen07 GOLD, Chardon, Ohio
16 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Gerard Way: "Hey, girls, you're beautiful. Don't look at those stupid magazines with sticklike models. Eat healthy and exercise. That's all. Don't let anyone tell you you're not good enough. You're good enough, you are too good. Love your family with all your heart and listen to it. You are gorgeous, whether you're a size 4 or 14. It doesn't matter what you look like on the outside, as long as you're a good person, as long as you respect others. I know it's been told hundreds of times before, but it's true. Hey, girls, you are beautiful."

This is really good and deep. I know exactly how being scared feels. :)

on Mar. 15 2010 at 5:53 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thanks! :) I'm really proud of this one.

Milo! said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 3:18 pm
I really like this one. It's so deep!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 6:32 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

This one's so sweet, but it's sad too. I like it!


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