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Promises

January 21, 2010
By VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?


You told me you would,
Now here we are.
This is the first time,
And now I'm not so sure.

You've shown me how
and explained with words.
But now that we're here,
I'm not so sure.

You position my hands,
making me shiver at your touch.
Then you move away,
waiting for the release.

I focus on your words
and position my feet.
You smile at me
As it soars into your hands.

I watch as you shift
to the stance you taught me.
You draw back and release
Making me nervous.

I'm taking no note
of what your doing.
Racing to get here
before it does.

It's been forgotten
because it's been beaten.
You reached me first
with a kiss.

We've somehow fallen,
with you on top.
I'm pinned to the ground,
inches from you face.

Our legs are tangled,
but neither of us care.
Your hands have my arms,
As you lean down.

You've rolled over now,
not breaking connection.
We're to tangled up
to care what happens.

You told me you would,
Now here we are.
This is the first time,
And now I'm lost with you.


The author's comments:
This a figment of my imagination.

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on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:37 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thanks! :) Can you read Two Worlds? I would love your opinion on that one. :)

on Apr. 13 2010 at 10:31 am
Kristain BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
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This one is different and very unique!! I love it :)

on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:41 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thanks so much for the comment! :)

on Apr. 8 2010 at 10:42 am
nature-elf PLATINUM, Ramsey, New Jersey
42 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If love is shelter, I'll walk in the rain." -Anonymous

This is a poem that sounds like one of mine (in a good way). It's good--I can imagine the scene.

on Apr. 3 2010 at 10:03 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

odd is my middle name. Can you read one of my pieces called "Two Worlds"? I would love your opinion on it. :)

on Apr. 3 2010 at 9:05 pm
Roserietta GOLD, Ft. Madison, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Did you ever notice how insignificant a single person is?" -Haruhi Suzimiya "Art is everything, and everything is art." -Me

Odd, but very good, very good indeed.

on Feb. 12 2010 at 9:21 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thank you! :)

LaVonna SILVER said...
on Feb. 12 2010 at 9:01 pm
LaVonna SILVER, Owatonna, Minnesota
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"dont let education get in your way of learning" -my American Lit teacher

i like how you use the word "tangled" its wierd in a CUTE way..i love it!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 6:13 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

I like this one but it's still wierd! Good job!


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