The Emotions of...

January 21, 2010
By lacole SILVER, Paris, Texas
lacole SILVER, Paris, Texas
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Red...Hearts...Rhyming...
She finally finds him
She feels like crying
She awaits his answer
She fears of hurting
The emotions leave her broken
She can;t leave the pieces...
Of her broken heart
It is taken...It's fading
She wishes it could be easier
Than this... She waits for...
The bliss...kiss...
The Emotions of love


The author's comments:
I had my heart broken recently and this poem just came to me like a crash.

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lacole SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2011 at 1:36 pm
lacole SILVER, Paris, Texas
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i kind of figured tht and thanks for telling me too..it feels so much better to let others see them..

M.S.S. GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 6:04 pm
M.S.S. GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"WACKADOO!!!" "You made a funny!" "Red Seven! Red Seven!! Red Seh-ven-a!!!" "Swaaaaag!!!!" "Ratchet" "God Said No" "God Said Yes"

Hey gurly...its Bria i'm so glad you took my advice and posted on TeenInk. Great poem by the way=)


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