Cinderella Story

January 16, 2010
By IsaakDeMaio PLATINUM, Williamsville, New York
IsaakDeMaio PLATINUM, Williamsville, New York
29 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am a controversial figure; my friends either hate me or dislike me." ~ Toni Morrison

She wants him,
she is done being alone,
she can't take it anymore,
she wants someone she can call her own.

She wants the attention,
the royalty and all,
she wants to be comfortable,
she wants to be caught by open arms to break her fall.

She wants him to love her imperfection,
she wants those tears to be smiles,
the blue days to be heaven,
and him to appreciate all her different styles.

She wants to feel his touch,
she wants to know it's all okay,
she wants the sudden rush,
to say "I love you" in every single way.

She wants a man with pride,
she wants to know how he feels,
she wants him to open up,
she wants to know that his love is real.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Apr. 26 2010 at 4:10 pm
MangoMoonlight BRONZE, Newton, Massachusetts
3 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Perfect is the enemy of good"

This is good- it seems more like song lyrics, not that that's a bad thing.  Nice idea, albeit a little cliche.  Great work overall.

on Feb. 9 2010 at 9:49 pm
KevinSpitzer BRONZE, Williamsville, New York
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"My mind shine even when my thoughts seem dark."

pretty good, i like the last verse the best.

on Jan. 30 2010 at 9:50 pm
Dark_Angel95 PLATINUM, Hickman, Kentucky
25 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
A simple minded person can understand the most complicated things.

i love this poem...i wish i could write like seem to make everything fit in every single should check and rate some of my would be greatly appriciated..but 5 stars..:)


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