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So many words
and not enough time.
So many verses
and not enough lines.

Always so much,
but never enough.
Always so perfect,
or that's what I thought.

Wasting my breath
on words you won't hear.
Wasting all my time
wishing you were near.

So many things
crowding up my mind.
Still not enough words
to fill up the lines.

Always so far
Never close enough.
Never so perfect,
Always in your thoughts.

Wasting my time
building up white walls.
Spending all my time
watching them all fall.





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***Rain*** said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 12:49 pm
I love it. Thats all Ive got.
 
Ebony_Rose replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 8:05 am
Thannks for the comments... :) ... And I will make sure to go check out some of your work Dreamer
 
dreamer_believer said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 12:47 pm
this is my favorite piece you have written :) i LOVE it!! the rhythm and flow of the poem is perfect. i can almost feel all of the raw emotion you put into the piece. it's awesome :) and it seemed to get better as i kept reading....5 stars!! :) would you mind checking out some of my work? id love your opinion.
 
TheWritician said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 2:08 pm
Wow thats really deep and I love it. You did a great job!
 
Ebony_Rose replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 5:54 pm
Thanks so much
 
SmileyFace94 replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 11:30 am
i agree! this is really deep. i love how each line rhymes and makes sense!
 
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