Seeing With Your Heart

January 13, 2010
By Melissa94 BRONZE, Manilla, Iowa
Melissa94 BRONZE, Manilla, Iowa
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You see my face, my smile,
But never my eyes so you look
Over the pain that’s in my heart.
You ask me a question.
My answer is always I'm Fine.
I'm two people at once.
I want you to know but then I don't.
It's my secret that needs to come out.
Will someone please persist and ask
Me what is really wrong.
Let me fill my eyes with tears
And let me tell you what
Has my heart grieving.


The author's comments:
This is my revised version. It's also a little longer.

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kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 4:13 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

no problem :)

on Apr. 1 2010 at 3:46 pm
Melissa94 BRONZE, Manilla, Iowa
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Thank you :)

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 6:48 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

This is simply beautiful!! I love it!


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