January 17, 2010
By OurLoveIsTrue GOLD, Johnstown, New York
OurLoveIsTrue GOLD, Johnstown, New York
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Your fingers twined perfectly
with mine
And You knew exactly what to say
As I Cried
And as I close My Eyes The Sun Sets
But Tis Not The Same Without
you Here to Compare
And the imprint Of Your Body
In The Grasses Beside me fade
And Im Left So Empty
I'll Close My Eyes
And Fade Away
Your venomous words sting the flesh
and Erupt all over my soul.

S.O.S Please Save Me...

The author's comments:
The memorys of my Fantasys erupt like fire across my mind.. Vanilla Twilight- Owl City

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on Mar. 14 2010 at 1:15 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

Beautiful. I love the song Vanilla Twilight. Used to be me and my ex's song. Lovely job (:

on Feb. 26 2010 at 7:57 pm
chocolateharp SILVER, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Dear God," she prayed, "let me be something every minute of every hour of my life. Let me be gay; let me be sad. Let me be cold; let me be warm. Let me be hungry...have too much to eat. Let me be ragged or well dressed. Let me be sincere - be deceitful. Let me be truthful; let me be a liar. Let me be honorable and let me sin. Only let me be something every blessed minute. And when I sleep, let me dream all the time so that not one little piece of living is ever lost." - Betty Smith (A Tree Grows in Brooklyn)

I've read all your poems now, and you have such a great perspective when writing about relationships (even lost ones). This is touching and heartfelt- I love "the imprint of your body in the grasses beside me fade".

*Jade* said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 10:39 pm
amazing,,,truly powerful. You have a way with words

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