deadly love

January 15, 2010
By maebug126 BRONZE, Millington, Tennessee
maebug126 BRONZE, Millington, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
A kiss makes the heart young again and wipes out the years.
Rupert Brooke


our love is dead
and you are gone but I die with out you

our love is dead
I drew my sword it's blade shining in the night my blood staining the ground
for you are gone
our love is dead
I close my eyes
tears run down my lifeless face
I reach for you but you are gone
so I die with out you by my side
our love is dead ..........and so am I


The author's comments:
this took me some time to right just as all pomes do XP lol

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on Jan. 27 2010 at 11:06 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx




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