The Middle Against Sleep

January 14, 2010
By inkprincess GOLD, Cumberland, Rhode Island
inkprincess GOLD, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I hear my voice and it's been here, silent all these years" -Tori Amos


uttered the road a story,
the spoken word,
a sound
which spills a tangible window
in her doused map.
she leand against midnight,
brown hair a
silvery world:
his world,
because he was ten years
out of knowing.
behind them they are her.
the road-heavy stillness,
dark blue music
he hates.
he stops,
and leaves
and leaves
tucked in her eyes


The author's comments:
strange ramblings born of a writing exercise that was suppost to challenge the laws of grammer and structure and all that... comstructive criticism please?

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