It Hurts

January 14, 2010
By abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
when life throws you lemons....throw back grenades


All the guilt and greef,the lies and misbelief....it hurts.

The love that isn't recieved and the goals that i cannot achieve...it hurts.

False tears from those who are told my sorrow, no remorseful thoughts of my tomorrow..it hurts

Burdens being tossed upon me like waste in an open sea...it hurts

feeling all alone in this cruel world without a friend or relative to help me get through pain......it hurts



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on Feb. 4 2011 at 6:48 pm
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If you don't leap you'lll never know what it's like to fly"

another great poem!! :) i love your style and i agree with jeangrey it does have a nice beat to it! i also like how you used repetition!!

on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:20 am
abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
17 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life throws you lemons....throw back grenades

thanks....i appreciate it but can you please tell people you know to read my poems and comment them...i really wanna be recognized for my poetry

JeanGrey GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 12:53 pm
JeanGrey GOLD, Mason City, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying."-Oscar Wilde

I like the emotional word repitition! Makes the poem stronger and more interesting and it has a nice beat.


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