It Hurts

January 14, 2010
All the guilt and greef,the lies and hurts.

The love that isn't recieved and the goals that i cannot hurts.

False tears from those who are told my sorrow, no remorseful thoughts of my hurts

Burdens being tossed upon me like waste in an open hurts

feeling all alone in this cruel world without a friend or relative to help me get through hurts

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PerfectMGymnast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 6:48 pm
another great poem!! :) i love your style and i agree with jeangrey it does have a nice beat to it! i also like how you used repetition!!
JeanGrey said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 12:53 pm
I like the emotional word repitition! Makes the poem stronger and more interesting and it has a nice beat.
abstractminded replied...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 11:20 am
thanks....i appreciate it but can you please tell people you know to read my poems and comment them...i really wanna be recognized for my poetry
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