I'm a selfish brat.

January 3, 2010
By swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face"
"no one ever drown in their own sweat"


I’m a selfish little brat
at least that’s what they tell me
when I try to be nice it comes out all wrong
I try to lend a hand but I always end up messing it up any ways
they say I don’t care about any one but myself I do.
I need to figure out how to show them
but I am scared they will make fun of me.



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on Jul. 25 2010 at 6:52 pm
swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face"
"no one ever drown in their own sweat"

Thank you for your feedback it helps.

on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:25 am
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
23 articles 10 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

topic understandable. writing. you could do better. im sorry. its missing something and you should make it smoother. other than that you ahve the right idea.


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