Times With You

January 11, 2010
By pampalooga PLATINUM, Natick, Massachusetts
pampalooga PLATINUM, Natick, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"We all can't be heroes. Somebody has to sit on the sides and clap as they go by." "In the end, they're just more words."


If I imagine the days,
count the seconds,
or relive the moments,
they don't taste the same
as the first time 'round.
If i retell the memory,
frame by frame,
even the smiles,
it doesn't sound genuine.
I guess maybe its because
the time with you
are meant just to be
with you.


The author's comments:
This is what I feel whenever I try to tell a friend of mine my special moments with someone else. I feel like sometimes I can't convey my emotions right.

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on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:53 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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wow this is really good keep it up.! :)

on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:14 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
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So true...I struggle with this all the time. You really managed to convey the feeling well!

on Feb. 16 2010 at 7:51 am
pampalooga PLATINUM, Natick, Massachusetts
30 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We all can't be heroes. Somebody has to sit on the sides and clap as they go by." "In the end, they're just more words."

thanks! will do :)

on Feb. 15 2010 at 9:17 pm
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

I love this poem. I really enjoyed it! You are a phenominal writer! Please, do me a favor...and keep writing. When you get the chance check out my opinion essay on animal rights/ vegetarianism


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