Times With You

If I imagine the days,
count the seconds,
or relive the moments,
they don't taste the same
as the first time 'round.
If i retell the memory,
frame by frame,
even the smiles,
it doesn't sound genuine.
I guess maybe its because
the time with you
are meant just to be
with you.





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***3Lli3*** said...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 1:53 pm
wow this is really good keep it up.! :)
 
MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 1:14 am
So true...I struggle with this all the time. You really managed to convey the feeling well!
 
alayapoetgirl said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 9:17 pm
I love this poem. I really enjoyed it! You are a phenominal writer! Please, do me a favor...and keep writing. When you get the chance check out my opinion essay on animal rights/ vegetarianism
 
pampalooga This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 7:51 am
thanks! will do :)
 
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