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Electric
when you touch me
Make my heart jump
when you say you love me
Unaware
of anything outside of you
Wondering
if you can feel it too
Cause the world
stops
when your skin touches mine
you
blow
my
mind.





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fzakeri1205 said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 2:47 pm
mm i really like this! it made me feel what you were saying and every word mattered. very nice!
 
Sydney P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 5:49 am
Oh thank you! I like this one too. I feel like my poetry AFTER this poem has improved alot, so I might post some of those, too! But thank you alot :)
 
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