Electric

January 5, 2010
By sydney_hope GOLD, Round Rock, Texas
sydney_hope GOLD, Round Rock, Texas
15 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Electric
when you touch me
Make my heart jump
when you say you love me
Unaware
of anything outside of you
Wondering
if you can feel it too
Cause the world
stops
when your skin touches mine
you
blow
my
mind.



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on Jan. 31 2010 at 5:49 am
sydney_hope GOLD, Round Rock, Texas
15 articles 0 photos 55 comments
Oh thank you! I like this one too. I feel like my poetry AFTER this poem has improved alot, so I might post some of those, too! But thank you alot :)

on Jan. 30 2010 at 2:47 pm
fzakeri1205 SILVER, Toledo, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\"It takes courage to grow up and become who you really are.\" - e.e. cummings

mm i really like this! it made me feel what you were saying and every word mattered. very nice!


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