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Our Mistake
I never expected perfect
But I never expected this.
I was under your spell,
Wher every look said:
Marry me!
Every smile:
Have my babies.
It's over now,
and I finally see our mistake.
Contrary, to your belief,
Our mistake was not breaking up
It was getting together.
we're the perfect human example
Of oil and water,
Impossible for us to mix,
For us to be,
Anything other then a heart breaking mistake.
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sounds like me and my ex, only...we still won't give up, even thought he's going off to college 3 hours away.
Overall i loved it, it got the message across. check spelling before you post, the where in line 4 is missing the E, happen though. I thought the lin "Have my babies" was a little disconnected, but i ssee where you were coming from, mostly out of experience.
The last stanza really got my attention.I think it was well delivered. Very nice writing.
its about quality not quantity!lol
thanks for reading!!!!
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