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one more breath

November 8, 2009
By Anonymous

one more hopeless breath
before i plan my death
most girls think about boys
ponies and flowers
but what i think about doesn't matter
no one cares
they never will
they ask me if I'm ok
but it's just a reminder than I'm not
sliding the knife to take my life
seems like the right thing to do
no one understands
no one can ever hear me
and they never will



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on Jan. 29 2010 at 8:00 am
silver_tear_drops GOLD, Muskegon, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
one day you might see all the pain you brought me and how i loved you still ~Faith Frye~

deep with emotion makes a great poem

on Jan. 13 2010 at 11:09 pm
writer@heart BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"If You don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything."

I feel this way all of the time...