one more breath

November 8, 2009
By , muskegon, MI
one more hopeless breath
before i plan my death
most girls think about boys
ponies and flowers
but what i think about doesn't matter
no one cares
they never will
they ask me if I'm ok
but it's just a reminder than I'm not
sliding the knife to take my life
seems like the right thing to do
no one understands
no one can ever hear me
and they never will

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writer@heart said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 11:09 pm
I feel this way all of the time...
silver_tear_drops replied...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 8:00 am
deep with emotion makes a great poem
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