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It was to late </3

By , Gas City, IN
A mirror shatters,
The girl cries,
All hope dies inside,
Broken fists,
Bloody wrists,
Broken dreams,
Silent Screams,
Insides shes broken
Feelings remain unspoken,
Locked away,
It all will stay,
There's nothing you can say,
It will not be okay,
Reality dissipates,
as her broken reflection fades away,
Flashing lights,
Sirens in the night,
Help arrives,
But shes barely alive,
She mutters her mistakes,
But it was to late....





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AquariusSun&Moon This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 10:55 am

I really like this poem's rhythm, the words are wonderfully strong, it conveys the emotion behind it very well. :)

 

 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 1:01 pm

Very deep. Strong. Emotions exuding from this page. Great job. I love it.

 

 
BaiLiHua This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 25, 2010 at 8:36 pm
You have a talent for conveying rich imagery. This was great.
 
XxMidnightxX replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 7:29 pm
Thank you very much :) Im glad you like it.
 
Carter P. said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 10:06 pm
Great poem!
 
XxMidnightxX replied...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 3:21 pm
Thank you! :)
 
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