It was to late </3 | Teen Ink

It was to late </3

October 7, 2009
By Anonymous

A mirror shatters,
The girl cries,
All hope dies inside,
Broken fists,
Bloody wrists,
Broken dreams,
Silent Screams,
Insides shes broken
Feelings remain unspoken,
Locked away,
It all will stay,
There's nothing you can say,
It will not be okay,
Reality dissipates,
as her broken reflection fades away,
Flashing lights,
Sirens in the night,
Help arrives,
But shes barely alive,
She mutters her mistakes,
But it was to late....


The author's comments:
I was having a really bad day and I just kinda gave up.

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on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:55 am
AquariusSunandMoon SILVER, Sublette, Illinois
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I really like this poem's rhythm, the words are wonderfully strong, it conveys the emotion behind it very well. :)

 


on Apr. 9 2010 at 1:01 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Very deep. Strong. Emotions exuding from this page. Great job. I love it.

 


on Apr. 2 2010 at 7:29 pm
XxMidnightxX BRONZE, Gas City, Indiana
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Thank you very much :) Im glad you like it.

on Mar. 25 2010 at 8:36 pm
LihuaEmily SILVER, North Kingstown, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"It is said that there's no such thing as a free lunch. But the universe is the ultimate free lunch." -Alan Guth

You have a talent for conveying rich imagery. This was great.

on Feb. 1 2010 at 3:21 pm
XxMidnightxX BRONZE, Gas City, Indiana
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Thank you! :)

cpayne BRONZE said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 10:06 pm
cpayne BRONZE, Kalkaska, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
It's never too late.

Great poem!