You make me..

December 19, 2009
By JaycobWithTheY BRONZE, Salisbury, North Carolina
JaycobWithTheY BRONZE, Salisbury, North Carolina
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You say when you see me,
You smile and know its right.
Without you i cant see,
And its hard to sleep at night.
Truth is I need you,
To stay by my side forever.
Alone there is nothing to do,
With you I never say never.
I love you Bree.
I really want this to be.
Just you and me.
You are the key.
You make me whole,
Now you own my soul.
Without you im a nobody
So this is to you my love.
You make me a somebody.

The author's comments:
I really do love my brianna :D

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on Jan. 18 2010 at 4:44 am
MaeRenee BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Why be miserable?"

did u use kingdom hearts as a little bit of an insiration? I love this poem, ur very sweet.

ic3Y said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 1:45 am
That is s0 sweEt!

babygirl said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 11:12 am
that is so sweet. i wish my BF would do something like that for me. i really hope she appreciates the poem. and i hope that u 2 stay 2gether 4ever!

on Jan. 10 2010 at 9:12 am
dan_wills07 SILVER, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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This is a little different but use more thought. 3 stars!

on Jan. 9 2010 at 11:53 am
luvinlife519 SILVER, Wilson, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
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aww, hope you win your girl

on Jan. 8 2010 at 4:42 pm
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
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Aww, that's really sweet. :)


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