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You make me..

You say when you see me,
You smile and know its right.
Without you i cant see,
And its hard to sleep at night.
Truth is I need you,
To stay by my side forever.
Alone there is nothing to do,
With you I never say never.
I love you Bree.
I really want this to be.
Just you and me.
You are the key.
You make me whole,
Now you own my soul.
Without you im a nobody
So this is to you my love.
You make me a somebody.





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ic3Y said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 1:45 am
That is s0 sweEt!
 
babygirl said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 11:12 am
that is so sweet. i wish my BF would do something like that for me. i really hope she appreciates the poem. and i hope that u 2 stay 2gether 4ever!
 
Daniel W. said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 9:12 am
This is a little different but use more thought. 3 stars!
 
luvinlife519 said...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 11:53 am
aww, hope you win your girl
 
dreamer said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 4:42 pm
Aww, that's really sweet. :)
 
MyRomeo replied...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 4:44 am
did u use kingdom hearts as a little bit of an insiration? I love this poem, ur very sweet.
 
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