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far and beyond
January 4, 2010
dost thou hear what i hear,dost thou see what i see?yes,but thou dost not see the beayty that i see.thou lookest at the outside, i lookest on the inside.thou lookest at what it appears to be,when i look far and beyond.thou hearest all sounds,but dost not stop to listen,i hearest every sound and recognize one from another.when you thinketh it noise,i thinketh it music.when you seeth it worthless,i seeth it beauty.Ye most learn to look and listen far and beyond.
© Grace L., Bacolod City, Philippines
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mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 3:06 pm
Thank you for your comment! I'm glad it is uplifting for you.:D
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 3:01 pm
Yes this poem did come straight from my heart. Thanks for your comment, and sorry it was confusing for you, maybe you should read it over.
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 2:55 pm
Thank you for your comment! And suggestion. I didn't think that my grammer was so important, I usually do it right, but I figured since other people write like that, I didn't need to worry about it, but I guess I will.
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 2:47 pm
Thank you for your comment! and yes i would love to read your work.
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 2:30 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
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CountryGothic GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 6:37 am
I love the way how in this poem you show that God is above all of us, even if we think we are doing what we think is our best. Though it could use some revising grammatically, I thought it was very inspirational! Keep writing! :)
dan_wills07 SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 8:50 am
This free verse was coming from your heart. It was a bit confusing but you gave it your best shot. 3 stars.
Mockingbird Song,
Far and Beyond is very uplifting. I like your ability to call the reader to see the glass as half full rather than as half empty. If you were thinking of submitting this piece to your school newspaper you might want to consider fixing the spelling mistakes (beayty to beauty), capitalizing words at the beginning of sentences, and simply rearranging the poem so that it appears as a stanza instead of in paragraph form. Their is meaning in your poem, making the grammatical changes will simply make it appear more polished overall. I hope you find these comments helpful.
Sincerely,
Alice B.
Far and Beyond is very uplifting. I like your ability to call the reader to see the glass as half full rather than as half empty. If you were thinking of submitting this piece to your school newspaper you might want to consider fixing the spelling mistakes (beayty to beauty), capitalizing words at the beginning of sentences, and simply rearranging the poem so that it appears as a stanza instead of in paragraph form. Their is meaning in your poem, making the grammatical changes will simply make it appear more polished overall. I hope you find these comments helpful.
Sincerely,
Alice B.
mariah said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 4:22 pm
this poem is really beautiful to me it say's to look at life at a better angle, and see people for who they really are. I love this poem
