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It hurts an won’t stop
I am feeling the pain
Try to push it away
Gripped tight
I am choking here
I am hurting
Now I am crying
It is taking my breath
I struggle for air
Hands are up in the wind
Come and take me away
All will be saved
Hold me tight
I fly
I am free
Soaring and feeling
Seeing the world
It used to fly past
I got nothing but a glimpse
Now time is slow
I am not in a rush
For I have no pain
The first time I feel happy





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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 8:50 pm
I like this one. the first part sounds like you're dying but theres some guy watching t.v. with headphones on so he doesnt know you're dying so you have to update him on your pain and suffering. thats why I like your stuff.
 
Ellie:) replied...
May 1, 2010 at 3:18 pm
thanks a lot :) thanks for commenting on my work it helps me get more inspired :)
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 1, 2010 at 4:46 pm
sure-five stars for you buddy.
 
Powd3er said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:28 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 4:30 pm
Awww thanks that is so sweet
 
pyropoet said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 1:44 pm
this is incredible. i can completely relate to how you were feeling when this was written. keep up the amazing work!!
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 4:29 pm
thank you so much :)
 
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