The Princess, the Servant, and the King

December 3, 2009
What I Desire

Some say, there is no such thing as a perfect place,
But I think otherwise.
I dream of a sea of striking cobalt waters,
The scent of a sweet, crisp, ocean breeze,
For this is what I desire.
I dream of a delicate wind, rustling through my hair like a waterfall,
The swift dancing of vivid emerald palm trees,
For this is what I desire.
I dream of the bloodred sunset, oh, the bloodred sunset, slashing the horizon,
And the sky, a cloudless canvas of colors,
For this is what I desire.
I dream of the taste of smooth relaxation on my tongue,
The sheet-white sand, curving precisely under my feet,
For this is what I desire.
And I dream of the rhythm of the wind’s whispered song,
The pleasant, serene aura,
Because this, is what I desire.

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LeslieAnn said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 4:19 pm
Thanks again for commenting my work. I think this piece is really great. I can picutre it all in my head and I think that makes for great writing. Keep it up!
TheFury replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 5:26 pm
aww! thank you! that means a lot! you keep writing as well!
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 6:32 pm
This is really good. Really deep. Has a lot of imagery in it. Beautiful. Keep writing.
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TheFury replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 7:35 pm
thank you so much! i will certainly like to read your work!
Powd3er said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:34 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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TheFury replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 7:38 pm
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