Does He Know

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Does he know how he still hurts me
About the wounds that'll never heal
Can he hear my broken sobs
A mournful whisper in the night

Does he feel this terrible pain
Radiating from my torn heart
Can he count all the tears I've shed
An amount too great to name

Does he hear my silent lips
Quietly repeating his name
Can he taste my cold sorrow
Bitter regret and sour loss

Does he see my unbearable ache
My heart's clawing at itself
Can he tell how I want to forget
Though I know I love him still

Does he notice how I wish to hold him
To go back to how we were before
Can he remember the memories I replay
When we promised to stay together.





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sydney_hope This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 16, 2010 at 5:23 pm
This is beautiful :) "my heart's clawing at itself"... I loved that line. I can relate.
 
shortstack11 replied...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 10:04 am
i can realate to this too it hurts so much when you think about that one special person....... =(
 
caughtinamoment said...
May 1, 2010 at 10:01 am

Simply stated, this poem is amazing. This describes exactly how I feel. You are a very talented writer, keep writing.

Favorite Line- Can he tell how I want to forget, Though I know I love him still

I always really like the entire last stanza. Especially the last two lines.

Amazing poem.  

 
FashionGuru said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 4:41 pm
Wow!!! I adore this piece. I can see how much pain there is in your voice. I've read ir work and it's all great!!
 
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