True Love

November 23, 2009
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When I see you, you take my breath away.
When you walk by me, I melt into a puddle.
You are the perfect guy.
After we got together I realized you weren't.
You said you would love me forever,
but you lied.
Instead, you broke me in two.
I'm glad you left the pieces.
Now Jesus can put me back together.





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Emely J. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 1, 2010 at 4:46 pm
I can describe this poem in 1 word:AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously, this poem is great. You have a great talent in speaking the truth. GOD BLESS YOU!!!!!!!!!
 
Doodlebug replied...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 3:31 pm
Thank you so much. You just made my day. You and your family will always be in my thoughts and prayers.
 
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