Thinking of You

November 30, 2009
By gothgirl13 GOLD, Red Hook, New York
gothgirl13 GOLD, Red Hook, New York
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When you crushed my heart, you didn't car.
When you took away my love, you felt no remorse.
When you sent me into despair, you had no regrets.
When I cried myself to sleep, you felt nothing.
When I thought of nothing but you, you were joyous.


The author's comments:
As most of my other poems, my inspiration was my breakup.

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on Dec. 28 2009 at 6:19 pm
gothgirl13 GOLD, Red Hook, New York
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sorry. i didn't realize that until now.

on Dec. 26 2009 at 5:32 pm
lunar_blessing44 BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind"





-Gandhi

It's good, but in the first line you forgot the 'e' in care

on Dec. 25 2009 at 10:21 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

This is really really good!!!

on Dec. 24 2009 at 6:44 pm
xxBrokenxxHeartedxxTrillionxx BRONZE, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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this is good,i like this


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