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LONE ECO

November 29, 2009
By LiTsAsSy BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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I loked in yours eyes but could not see what i was meant to see.I called out your name but there was no answer only silance i screamed out HELLO!! All i heard was a eco. I tried to grab you but i couldnt hold on. I thought you loved me i yelled out. You said you would never leave me alone. Why do i fell that you are so far gone. I felt a cold brush coming from behind,i quickly turned around but u was not there. Were are you an why am i not there.

© Sarah C., Hillsdale, NJ

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I WAS HEART BROKE FROM SOMEONE THAT TOLD ME HE LOVED ME BUT TURNED HE'S BACK ON ME SO THAT INSPIRED ME TO RIGHT THIS PEOM.
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