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November 21, 2009
By LostInConfusion BRONZE, Texarkana, Texas
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Who-rah!

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Two years I spent trying to get you. I finally got you. You built me up. Broke down my walls. Made me feel alive and it felt so right. I never thought we'd make it here but, look, here we are. Everything was great until she came along. You cheated and let me go and I want to hate you but I can't. You made me fall in love with you and it hurts so bad to know that we'll never be the same. You made me build those walls back up stronger than before. You made me hate who your with. You made me hate my friend. It's your fault because you made me...

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This was actually an experience I had here pretty recently. It's bad enough to lose the one you love and see them in another's arms, but it's even worse to see them in the arms of someone you thought was your friend.
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