Never Heard

November 20, 2009
By alchive PLATINUM, Fort Worth, Texas
alchive PLATINUM, Fort Worth, Texas
38 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best cure for writer's block is...to write


Written Words
flow freely through
me-
they are
me
I am
blessed-
i can create.
i am
cursed-
my words are
read, never
heard...


The author's comments:
I'm so glad to hear that I'm not the only one to feel this way. And yes- it is partly self-inflicting.

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Meezy GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 9:54 am
Meezy GOLD, Hutchinson, Kansas
10 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't think twice, it's all right.

I totally agree. Enough said.

on Mar. 6 2010 at 4:41 pm
redcg416 SILVER, Parker, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
People who think sitting in a church will make you a christian must think that sitting in a garage will make you a car.

It is short, sweet, and beautiful. I think anyone who has ever writtin can realate.

on Mar. 6 2010 at 3:28 pm
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

this has a beautiful flow, i can relate also. it has a solid stand point i love it. great job

JamieRose[= said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 2:29 pm
I write, not to be heard, but to express, to inspire, and to create. These words are yours, and they hold value, but why does that value dwindle if they are only heard by you? They should be carried in the same light, no matter the number of viewers, because poetry isn't supposed to be proud, it's supposed to be intimate, and a reflection of self, and life. Reflect on why you write, and yourself, not who is reading.

on Mar. 5 2010 at 9:55 pm
i_am_nobody SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
7 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, don't take anyone's sh*t, and never let them take you alive." -Gerard Way

those r to completely different lines! you cant go on about that! this is freeform. for one situation, people can write how they feel it. so why does it matter if the word me is used twice in the same stanza?

on Mar. 5 2010 at 9:49 pm
WaterQueen07 GOLD, Chardon, Ohio
16 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Gerard Way: "Hey, girls, you're beautiful. Don't look at those stupid magazines with sticklike models. Eat healthy and exercise. That's all. Don't let anyone tell you you're not good enough. You're good enough, you are too good. Love your family with all your heart and listen to it. You are gorgeous, whether you're a size 4 or 14. It doesn't matter what you look like on the outside, as long as you're a good person, as long as you respect others. I know it's been told hundreds of times before, but it's true. Hey, girls, you are beautiful."

Wow I love this poem AND all the comments! I feel like I'm not alone.

on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:47 pm
nature-elf PLATINUM, Ramsey, New Jersey
42 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If love is shelter, I'll walk in the rain." -Anonymous

Yes, it repeats the "me" part. "Written words/flow freely through/ME-/they are/me.

on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:28 pm
i_am_nobody SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
7 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, don't take anyone's sh*t, and never let them take you alive." -Gerard Way

no it doesnt

on Mar. 5 2010 at 5:22 pm
nature-elf PLATINUM, Ramsey, New Jersey
42 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If love is shelter, I'll walk in the rain." -Anonymous

Loved it, except for the repeat "they are ME"--that part says "me" twice.

dancer4729 said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 12:25 pm
dancer4729, Fruita, Colorado
0 articles 8 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For Me it's hard to write about the nice trees and flowers and happy shit. It's a lot easier to write about whats pissing you off." ~Adam Gontier

I can totally relate to that. Great job at writing. I love the simplicity of it. Great Job!

closed-in said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 10:27 am
i feel like that feels like everyday to be honest cause it seems loke nobody eles will listen but just my friends but sometimes they dont even listen <,>

on Mar. 4 2010 at 9:32 pm
Destiny21 SILVER, Wendover, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesnt mean your weak. sometimes it means your stronger to let go

I cant say I dont feel like this. Loved it

on Mar. 4 2010 at 4:53 pm
Loved it. That's how I feel about most of my writing.

on Mar. 4 2010 at 3:51 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
16 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Pretty good, it's a great way to get out feelings isn't it?

on Mar. 4 2010 at 1:59 pm
shininglife2273 SILVER, Omaha, Nebraska
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
" gaurd youre heart above all else, for it is the well spring of life " proverbs. --- somethingorother.. (:

love how simple it is! Good job! (:

on Mar. 3 2010 at 6:24 pm
this poem is wonderful i speak the same way.

on Dec. 17 2009 at 5:56 pm
BlueAstronaut PLATINUM, Herndon, Virginia
33 articles 36 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tiny curtains open and we hear the tiny clap of little hands
A tiny man would tell a little joke and get a tiny laugh from all the folks"




Missed the Boat - Modest Mouse

radical :]

i like the simplicity.

have you ever thought of writing structured poetry?

i think you'd be good at it


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