Never Heard

November 20, 2009
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Written Words
flow freely through
they are
I am
i can create.
i am
my words are
read, never

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Meezy said...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 9:54 am
I totally agree. Enough said.
redcg416 said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 4:41 pm
It is short, sweet, and beautiful. I think anyone who has ever writtin can realate.
christin.bass said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 3:28 pm
this has a beautiful flow, i can relate also. it has a solid stand point i love it. great job
JamieRose[= said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 2:29 pm
I write, not to be heard, but to express, to inspire, and to create. These words are yours, and they hold value, but why does that value dwindle if they are only heard by you? They should be carried in the same light, no matter the number of viewers, because poetry isn't supposed to be proud, it's supposed to be intimate, and a reflection of self, and life. Reflect on why you write, and yourself, not who is reading.
WaterQueen07 said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 9:49 pm
Wow I love this poem AND all the comments! I feel like I'm not alone.
M.A.C. said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 5:22 pm
Loved it, except for the repeat "they are ME"--that part says "me" twice.
i_am_nobody replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 8:28 pm
no it doesnt
M.A.C. replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 8:47 pm
Yes, it repeats the "me" part. "Written words/flow freely through/ME-/they are/me.
i_am_nobody replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 9:55 pm
those r to completely different lines! you cant go on about that! this is freeform. for one situation, people can write how they feel it. so why does it matter if the word me is used twice in the same stanza?
dancer4729 said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 12:25 pm
I can totally relate to that. Great job at writing. I love the simplicity of it. Great Job!
Destiny said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 9:32 pm
I cant say I dont feel like this. Loved it
closed-in replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 10:27 am
i feel like that feels like everyday to be honest cause it seems loke nobody eles will listen but just my friends but sometimes they dont even listen <,>
punksk8rgurll said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 4:53 pm
Loved it. That's how I feel about most of my writing.
CountryGothic said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 3:51 pm
Pretty good, it's a great way to get out feelings isn't it?
shininglife2273 said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 1:59 pm
love how simple it is! Good job! (:
princess alicia said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 6:24 pm
this poem is wonderful i speak the same way.
BlueAstronaut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 5:56 pm
radical :]
i like the simplicity.
have you ever thought of writing structured poetry?
i think you'd be good at it
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