World War 10

November 20, 2009
In a million years
the firghting wont end
same old story
dont have to pretend
watch the world slowly die
off to war!
you cant deny
so many lives lost
but why cant they see
fighting and violence
would never succeed
bodies perishing
forever more
watch the bones
wash up on shore
no matter what you do
or what you say
the war will continue
until we've all
faded away

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Aurora said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 8:03 am
your poem has good rhyme and rhythm and i love it!
QuestionAuthority1128 said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 10:51 pm
I thought this poem was okay. I agree with what you're saying and you have a powerful point, but I felt like there wasn't really anything original about it. Maybe try to expand on it and make it longer, or tell about wars from different viewpoints?
(also, this is just the OCD part of me, but in the second line you spelled "fighting" wrong).
SilverMoon said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 1:35 pm
Hey, i looked this up like you asked! This is really good. Honest! I totally know what you're saying by the war being endless!
Pensivegurl replied...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 8:55 pm
I SO AGREE! This poem's really pretty!>.<
purple_ashes said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 5:01 pm
please comment and rate! tell me what you think:)
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