Alone

November 19, 2009
By mutekid016 GOLD, Gap, Pennsylvania
mutekid016 GOLD, Gap, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember when you play like a girl used to be an insult?" Mia Hamm


i need you
need you to help me
trapped in time
broken, bleeding
never to be fixed
hopelessness
surrounds me
threatening to take my soul
the only way i am surviving
my heart beats
only just
my brain thinks
but only for me to shuffle
with no motavation
the light gone from my eyes
pain holding me captive
why am i darkened
depressed so i am dying?
im suffacting
choking on air
it's more than i can bear
people watch
wide eyed and scared
and even when i call out
no one answers
all alone
on this lonely road
i am walking
for the rest of my days
not a light in the sky
breathing shallow and weak
i fall hoping to leave
leave this pain and cruelty
then they will cry
regret they just watched
and waited
no avail
i am still here
hanging on by a thread
wishing i was dead
you could call me suicidal
you may be right
but i dont need a name
just a way
to see right

for the first time
first time in a long time


The author's comments:
Was going Through a hard time when I wrote this. Not really Suicidal so don't think that. Just wanted to publish this.

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on Dec. 28 2009 at 7:23 pm
mutekid016 GOLD, Gap, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember when you play like a girl used to be an insult?" Mia Hamm

This life is so complicated, thanks for the comment!

on Dec. 27 2009 at 2:52 pm
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

You're so right, sometimes writing just lets it out, and it's a better outlet than some.

Lovely poem, expressive, and I know way too many people including myself have felt these emotions.

Keep writing and thanks for the comment.

:)




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