Sunset

November 8, 2009
By CaseyLeigh PLATINUM, Moraga, California
CaseyLeigh PLATINUM, Moraga, California
31 articles 6 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
My wish, for you, is that this life becomes all that you want it to.


The day reaches its winter,
its last minutes
in the sky. It hovers
as if to forestall the
inevitable.

The darkness, a
lethal opponent, reaches
to choke day. A struggle ensues,
sky burning blood red
with the last of day’s
endurance.

With a lingering gasp,
the day sinks into oblivion
and dies.



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on Nov. 29 2009 at 8:32 am
greygardens SILVER, Lombard, Illinois
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wonderful! very majestic :) http ://teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/147175/opportunity/

mimi2.0 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 9:33 pm
mimi2.0 BRONZE, Fremont, California
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you really want it, then you gotta try for it. IF your hyped, the put it on the field"
"Marching band not only shows my love for music, it shows my love for everything around me."

simple and beautiful




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