Snow in August

November 8, 2009
By supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don't fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.


Is this love?
It can't be happening!
You came like snow in August
I didn't think it could happen
Guys like you don't go for girls like me
You came like an earthquake
When I least expected it
My motto for relationships
was always
Better Safe then Sorry

But Your eyes were so...
and your lips were warm and soft
and your hands were strong

And you came like snow in august
I didn't think it could happen

The author's comments:
it kinda says it all, huh?

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Swagger Cazy said...
on Dec. 12 2009 at 12:36 pm
this is porchia i just changed my username.Oh

on Dec. 6 2009 at 5:46 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don't fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

what PORCHIA wrote about, u know

Swagge Crazy said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 12:23 am
what must be reall tough?

on Dec. 1 2009 at 5:23 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don't fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

o im sorry. that must be really tough

PORCHIA BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 5:16 pm
PORCHIA BRONZE, Columbus, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
''I AM WHO I AM''

I WROTE ABOUT SOME THINGS THAT I'VE BEEN THROUGH SUCH AS MY FATHER NEVER BEING IN MY LIFE,HOW MY AUNT UP AND LEFT OUT OF MY LIFE WHEN SHE SAID SHE'D NEVE LEAVE,ETC.

on Nov. 29 2009 at 6:58 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don't fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

haha thanx!!<br />
i wrote when i was on the 'zone'  if u know  what i mean.<br />
i just now realized how incredibly cheesy it is haha

on Nov. 29 2009 at 6:47 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don't fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

yeah um i think i am mistaken.

sorry bout that

what did u write about?

PORCHIA BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 10:19 pm
PORCHIA BRONZE, Columbus, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
''I AM WHO I AM''

YOU ARE PROBABLY MISTAKEN

NONE OF MY POEMS HAVE BEEN PUBLISHED YET.

DO YOU KNOW WHERE YOU SAW IT AT

JUST I CASE

on Nov. 28 2009 at 3:38 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i love this!! :) ahhh, it's soo good! how true is this? lol. i like the honestly in it, and the sweetness :) it's very good. the rhythm makes the poem roll off your tongue :) nice work. would you mind checking out some of my work, id appreciate the feedback :)

on Nov. 27 2009 at 9:20 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don't fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

o trust me it takes a while

haha but ur good=)

i think i commented on one of ur things

PORCHIA BRONZE said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 6:15 pm
PORCHIA BRONZE, Columbus, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
''I AM WHO I AM''

THIS IS VERY GOOD.

I WISH THEY WOULD HURRY AND PUBLISH MINE.

MAYBE YOU COULD CHECK EM OUT LATER


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