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Snow in August

Is this love?
It can't be happening!
You came like snow in August
I didn't think it could happen
Guys like you don't go for girls like me
You came like an earthquake
When I least expected it
My motto for relationships
was always
Better Safe then Sorry

But Your eyes were so...
and your lips were warm and soft
and your hands were strong

And you came like snow in august
I didn't think it could happen



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dreamer_believer said...
Nov. 28, 2009 at 3:38 pm:
i love this!! :) ahhh, it's soo good! how true is this? lol. i like the honestly in it, and the sweetness :) it's very good. the rhythm makes the poem roll off your tongue :) nice work. would you mind checking out some of my work, id appreciate the feedback :)
 
supergrrrl_4808 replied...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 6:58 pm :
haha thanx!!<br /> i wrote when i was on the 'zone'  if u know  what i mean.<br /> i just now realized how incredibly cheesy it is haha
 
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PORCHIA said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 6:15 pm:
THIS IS VERY GOOD.
I WISH THEY WOULD HURRY AND PUBLISH MINE.
MAYBE YOU COULD CHECK EM OUT LATER
 
supergrrrl_4808 replied...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 9:20 pm :
o trust me it takes a while
haha but ur good=)
i think i commented on one of ur things
 
PORCHIA replied...
Nov. 28, 2009 at 10:19 pm :
YOU ARE PROBABLY MISTAKEN
NONE OF MY POEMS HAVE BEEN PUBLISHED YET.
DO YOU KNOW WHERE YOU SAW IT AT
JUST I CASE
 
supergrrrl_4808 replied...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 6:47 pm :
yeah um i think i am mistaken.
sorry bout that
what did u write about?
 
PORCHIA replied...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 5:16 pm :
I WROTE ABOUT SOME THINGS THAT I'VE BEEN THROUGH SUCH AS MY FATHER NEVER BEING IN MY LIFE,HOW MY AUNT UP AND LEFT OUT OF MY LIFE WHEN SHE SAID SHE'D NEVE LEAVE,ETC.
 
supergrrrl_4808 replied...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 5:23 pm :
o im sorry. that must be really tough
 
Swagge Crazy replied...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 12:23 am :
what must be reall tough?
 
supergrrrl_4808 replied...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 5:46 pm :
what PORCHIA wrote about, u know
 
Swagger Cazy replied...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 12:36 pm :
this is porchia i just changed my username.Oh
 
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