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The sun screamed in my eyes.
Pain was inflicted upon them, while my pupils began to be
scorched,
my eyelids seared,
brows shrunken.
Although the agony,
I continued on,
towards the unknown ahead.
A brilliant light,
wildly askew in many places,
lay before me.
The feeling inside of me was certain.
Curious.
I had never seen such a place before,
a place with miles and miles of barren land,
untouched and lonely.
There were quiet voices here,
barely trying to be heard,
but still here.
It wasn’t space, but yet, it was not Earth.
An area between life and nonexistence.
My body urged me forward,
wanting me to give up.
But,
what was ahead?
Happiness?
Death ?
Questions circled round,
and,
round inside of my head.
I could not linger,
anymore, for it was time,
to force myself,
to go Inside of the abnormal world.

I went Inside, and
closed my eyes.
Darkness plunged on me.
I opened my eyes,
to look up at the roof of a wooden,
pale white rectangular object.
Silence was finally accomplished.
I was at peace,
alone.
Dead.



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Rosalie said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 5:49 am:
this is..wow
u really have a talent!
if you have time, please read some of mine!
 
Oliviaw replied...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 6:31 pm :
Yes of course! Thank you for the comment!
 
Rosalie replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 4:10 am :
please please write more!
 
Oliviaw replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 5:09 pm :
Thank you, I will write some more. I'm going to read some of yours too.
 
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PoetUnknown said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 12:02 pm:
wow...that was goood.....i like how you commented on your own work. something i would do...i rated my own although the one's i posted temporarily sucks. but that was good... i gotta read the mushroom next. :)
 
Oliviaw replied...
Dec. 25, 2009 at 9:33 pm :
Haha, yeah. I'm going to read some of yours now... thanks for the comments!
 
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Oliviaw said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 5:08 pm:
Wow, great....
 
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