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Living in the Moment

Life is the flash of light;
gone as soon as you turn

Life is like a dream;
all too soon we awake

Life is like a Memoir;
read once and tossed aside

Life is like a raod trip;
a long and bumpy ride

Life is like candy;
great until it's gone

Life is like the rain;
beatiful and dangerous

Life is like a boat;
sometimes you sink

Life is like a book;
written for you alone

"Life happens in the instant..."


What's your story?




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silverwolf63 said...
Feb. 15, 2012 at 9:44 pm:
good job! very creative
 
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justyouraverageperson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 3:35 pm:
Whoa! I just read "I Am Offended" and I'm shocked the same person wrote both of these. This is excellent!! Try writing more like this.
 
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sunshine04 said...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 8:51 am:
its super awesome and i agree with u 
 
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ilovewriting95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 11:09 pm:
Wow! I love this poem and I totally agree! Great job! You should write more! :)
 
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ShadowriderThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 10:50 pm:
This is cool but I like your "I am offended" article better. You're a great poet!
 
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M_IMLThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 4:38 pm:
I'm surprised....I totally disagreed with what you said in "offender", but this? This is great!
 
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Jakethesnake said...
Nov. 21, 2010 at 7:39 pm:
I personally HATED your I am offended article, but this I love.
 
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WritingLoverForever said...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 3:14 pm:
This is beautiful. Life is exactly like how you described it. I LOVED this.
 
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Still_Waters26 said...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 12:21 pm:
I loved this.  Really cool and creative.  Nice...
 
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Kasumi said...
May 29, 2010 at 10:11 pm:
I really like this thought about life being like your own story. its how I have always thought life to be like. Great job, I LOVED it!
 
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Veritytrue said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 6:26 pm:
I loved it! Life truly happens only moment to moment, and I think you really highlighted the importance of living it that way. Great job!
 
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chu-chi,!!! said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 11:12 am:
I truly loved this poem, because it's so deep and I think most of us take life for granted.
Excellent job =•)
 
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supp said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 6:37 pm:
this was really good :)
 
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thepreechyteenager said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 4:52 pm:
i liked it, especially ur comments on ur article, i think that will be one of my favorite quotes
 
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alli.babi. said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 4:03 pm:
i love this poem! : ] great job!
 
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ilovetinkerbell said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 3:11 pm:
i loved it. you did an awesome job on writing this. Life is often like what you described. great job.
 
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