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White marble eyes, staring out into space,
Blank of all expression, all emotion,
A curious tilt of her head,
A serene smile playing upon the corners of her lips,
A snapshot of her life,
Of one moment lost forever in time,
Capturing all of her beauty, but none of her feeling,
Capturing all of her expression, but none of its meaning,
Capturing all but the thoughts in her mind,
Capturing all but the secrets she carries in her heart,
A tangible Mona Lisa.




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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 6:00 pm:
Whoa.
This is beautiful.
I love the first line.
Its so descriptive.
 
alex9426 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 8:22 pm :
one question for you: i'm thinking abotu submitting this to my school's literary magazine. do you think i should? is it good enough? thanks.
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 9:25 pm :
Yes, by all means. This is beautiful and deserves to be published and deserves recognition from all kind of readers. So, submit it. I'm rooting for ya!
 
alex9426 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 5:04 pm :
ok i will thanks
 
alex9426 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 10:14 pm :
sorry to be a bother, but do you think i should also submit my poem "inpsiration"
 
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