Beautiful Child

October 27, 2009
By BubbiG GOLD, Columbia, Maryland
BubbiG GOLD, Columbia, Maryland
14 articles 4 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"NEVER LOOK BACKWARDS ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD!"

Lisa Left-eye Lopes


Beautiful Child

What a beautiful child.
A beautiful child with the most beautiful smile.
The beautiful child has a unique style.
So innocent!
What a gorgeous beautiful child.

Long, black hair pulled into a bun.
Beautiful child with her long, beige, flower dress.
She’s unresponsive looking up at the sun.
I approached the unresponsive, beautiful child.

I looked the child deep in her eyes.
The child looked surprised.
Something tells me that she’s not a happy child.
I see sadness.
I feel a dark presence.
But yet she’s the most beautiful child I’ve ever seen.

I notice something strange about her.
She seems unstable and appears hurt.
I try to communicate, but she doesn’t speak a word.
I want to be the beautiful child’s friend.
But she won’t let me in.

I want to know what’s in her heart.
But I don’t know where to start.
I studied the child closely searching for something.
I notice her dress is way too big and appears not clean.
I’m suspicious at this point and than I spot something shocking.

The child has bruises on her arms.
Now I’m instantly alarmed.
Now I can see what’s going on.
The child now has tears in her eyes.
I’m so stunned, now I have tears in mine.

I gathered the child in my arms.
She cries on my shoulder.
I have to remain strong.
I have to help her.
I tell her I’m her friend.
I will let nothing more happen to her.

I will keep the beautiful child safe.
Take her away from a dangerous place.
This child deserves better.
I will fight to make sure she get’s better.
My beautiful child!
I will never let you down.



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waheed said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 12:48 am
a well versed poem, comprises all essential elements , feelings, imagination, love and compassion. beautiful

BubbiG GOLD said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 6:11 pm
BubbiG GOLD, Columbia, Maryland
14 articles 4 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"NEVER LOOK BACKWARDS ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD!"

Lisa Left-eye Lopes

I'm glad you enjoyed it and if you need any support you can talk to me, even though we don't know each other!

on Nov. 12 2009 at 3:04 pm
Welliver BRONZE, Lewisburg, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Tell me something I dont know dangu.

I read this poem aloud. I can realate to it totally. I mite not had bruessis on my arms but Very many in my heart.

BubbiG GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 7:05 pm
BubbiG GOLD, Columbia, Maryland
14 articles 4 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"NEVER LOOK BACKWARDS ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD!"

Lisa Left-eye Lopes

thank you very much i appreciate your comment. i love helping people. anybody who needs help I'm there to support. one day i plan to become a psychologist.

meggers SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 10:37 am
meggers SILVER, San Angelo, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
if u cant say something nice then dont say anything at all

this is a really good story it reminds me of my fav song concrete angel.we all need someone like you in our lives to reach ou to us when we hurt. overall great poem.


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